Monday, August 29, 2011

Summer Reading and Great Storytelling


For my summer reading book, I chose the novel A Brave New World, by Aldous Huxley.  Like so many others, I enjoy works of dystopian fiction, such as the enormously popular novel by George Orwell of the same genre.  However, Huxley’s novel greatly deviates from 1984: his artistic vision creates a world with a peaceful dystopian society that is focused on a perfect society created by genetic engineering and the absence of individuality.  Huxley created many pertinent and powerful points conveyed throughout his novel, and thus his novel strongly embodied the iceberg effect—meaning there was much more message that had to be discovered and dug from the text itself, i.e. 8/9 of the novel’s “meat” was submerged beneath the text.  However, what really propelled this book to the next level was how he presented his “meat—” by delivering it to the reader on his golden platter of great storytelling. 
            The most impressive aspect of Huxley’s writing is the offspring of his creative vision.  Huxley births this very innovative society with his writing structure, his symbolic allusions, and through the reader’s introduction to the world itself.  By introducing the novel in a hatchery center, combined with the carefully placed speech given by the director of the facility, he invokes the reader through a symbolic “birth” into his world:
I shall begin at the beginning, said the [Director,] and the more zealous students recorded his intention in their notebooks: Begin at the beginning. "These," he waved his hand, "are the incubators." And opening an insulated door he showed them racks upon racks of numbered test-tubes. "The week's supply of ova. Kept," he explained, "at blood heat; whereas the male gametes," and here he opened another door, "they have to be kept at thirty-five instead of thirty-seven. Full blood heat sterilizes." Rams wrapped in theremogene beget no lambs.
Still leaning against the incubators he gave them, while the pencils scurried illegibly across the pages, a brief description of the modern fertilizing process; spoke first, of course, of its surgical introduction–"the operation undergone voluntarily for the good of Society (Huxley 3).
Furthermore, Huxley created a world filled with his own historical terminology, events, and figures that break up the time continuum into a more realistic novel.  For example, he dubbed “Bokanovsky's Process” and created a “past” to his future of man; however, his most powerful device is his incorporation of the great industrialist, Henry Ford, into the novel.  Huxley replaces A.D. with A.F. (after Ford) and “oh, my God” with “oh, my Ford;” by this, he inserts Ford in the place of God.  In Huxley’s created world, rather than the teaching of God—the meek will inherit the earth, human flaw and weakness, individuality, and mental well being—the notion of “Ford” reflects his world’s industrialized survival of the fittest—where society is streamlined to avoid flaws and to live a comfortable, social, existence.  Huxley’s invocation of Ford sets the framework of his dystopia from the top, thus, he allows his characters to the fill the bottom of his artistic society.
            The next aspect that should be noted about Huxley’s storytelling is his characters;  he cleverly creates characters who are totally unique to one another and who represent different themes and aspects of the society he creates. (That’s all for this rough draft: more to come soon!)

4 comments:

  1. Brandon, you do a very good job of describing the book in a way that is very appealing. I like your example of birth in the book, but I think you should spend more time explaining why you think that passage in particular is an example of good storytelling. Furthermore, you mention very briefly about the great job the author does in developing his characters. I think you should on or two examples of this and spend time explaining why you think they are interesting characters. I think you do an amazing job of highlighting the strengths about the book but rather than just talking about the book as a whole you should try to find specific examples and then give your own opinion. Great start!

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  2. Brandy,
    This is a great first draft. You strived at keeping a consistent topic throughout the work, and were able to do so using impressive word choice. I agree with Aida in that maybe you should find a little bit more to discuss concerning the weaknesses of the story. I understand that this is a first draft, and my own work was written very late at night, so not everything is expected to be perfect. I am looking forward to what you are going to write after the last idea you put above. If you stay consistent with your main idea, I think this is something to be really proud of! One thing though, In your main thesis, maybe include a little more specificity of what you like about the storytelling, so that you can help lead the reader to your main ideas with more focus. But overall really good job. Can't wait to read on.
    rju

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  3. Hey Brandon!!
    This is an amazing start! You have some really great ideas and I can tell that you put a lot of thought into it. I don't have any major critiques, other than you repeat words a few times ("meat," dystopian, etc.), but that is a minor minor minor issue. Also, make sure to include the characters into your thesis--I think your first main thought about creative vision fits very well into your current thesis, but characters may require a little shout out in your thesis as well since they don't directly and automatically connect to the theme of "'meat' beneath the text" for the reader. These mini-critiques, however, are just me being overly picky. So overall, this is basically the perfect, quintessential first draft. Great job! (:
    -Megan

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  4. Brandon,
    Overall, you have the workings for what could be a great piece of writing. You do a good job of quickly and effectively explaining what you are going to be talking about in the first few lines. The only issue I see is the shortness of your final paragraph and lack of a very strong conclusion, but luckily both of these are easy fixes as your first draft has already provided an easy starting point to make improvements. Great job.
    -Ryan

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